Its funny how sometimes you work on a song for a while and eventually feel mildly satisfied with the result.
But then a close friend tells you that the songs great but the vocal suck - I originally used Kristins voice for this tune - then the penny dropped - I was after smooth not smokey. I must have been on a 0 high at the time.
Browse that Mr Moon fellow’s pells…
I could have used half a dozen but settled on an old favorite.
I think it works now.